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all you needed was me

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Inspired by this song: [link]

Commission for :icondamefortune:
I hope it's not too late... ^^;
But if it is, I hope you think it was worth the wait.
And I hope the two of you like this! :'D
(Fff I used hope three times D: )

Characters (c) ~DameFortune
Art (c) *thelunacy-fringe me, of course
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

First I have to say I really like your style and the way you used your shading to show a little of the fur texture. You did a good job on the background, too, especially on the trees.

I think you could use a little more shading on both the canines, and also make the shadows underneath them darker. The background is really grey, so I think maybe the white character's colors should be de-saturated some.

I also two little things on the legs. To me, it looks like the white one's front legs are facing more toward the viewer than the back legs. The dark one looks fine except that I don't think it would be very comfortable to have that right leg bent around under its body. Better just not to show it at all, or to make it clearer that the canine has its hips sideways. I hope that description makes sense lol.

Good job, and keep up the good work! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin) - :D"/>